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Feb. 25th, 2010 04:13 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
lady_t_220Still on the editing wagon. But I like chapter 4. Chapter 4's quite good I think. Chapter 3 still needs re-writing but I've done it once today already, half of it completely from the ground-up and it's still not right, so it can sit and wait until the next sweep through. Maybe by then it will resolve itself. Or I will have figured out more clearly what it was I was attempting to express in the first place and work out a better way to illustrate it.
Chapter 5 I think will need some smoothing but be more or less ok. Chapter 6 I think I quite liked when I wrote it so who knows what that's like. Chapters 7 and 8 though, they need help. Ugh. They also need to be either cut down or split into 7, 8 and 9 cause they're both rediculously verbose.
I know no one really cares, but I reserve the right to babble meaninglessly to myself none the less.
Chapter 5 I think will need some smoothing but be more or less ok. Chapter 6 I think I quite liked when I wrote it so who knows what that's like. Chapters 7 and 8 though, they need help. Ugh. They also need to be either cut down or split into 7, 8 and 9 cause they're both rediculously verbose.
I know no one really cares, but I reserve the right to babble meaninglessly to myself none the less.
