Wow, I actually wrote something...
Granted it's only an additional half a page onto an aleady long-ish fic, but it's half a page of the start of an argument at a whole load of cross-purposes. So there's not only opinion but assumption from both sides, one of which is theoretical because it's 1st person fic so you have to get their interpretation of the opposing side, while also keeping in mind the actuality of the other side's opinion so you can get them to argue but give every comment enough space for misenterpretation so that they're both arguing the wrong arguments without knowing the other's actual opinion, just their assumption about it, all of which has to be conveyed through one narrator... and I'm making my head hurt just thinking about it.
I'm going to shut up and go to bed now, I think.
Because the argument has a beginning and an end... I just have to link the two of them together somehow.
As a sidenote, if you search yahoo photos for Cinzano bianco, you get at least 4 pictures of Craig Charles. That amuses me.
Granted it's only an additional half a page onto an aleady long-ish fic, but it's half a page of the start of an argument at a whole load of cross-purposes. So there's not only opinion but assumption from both sides, one of which is theoretical because it's 1st person fic so you have to get their interpretation of the opposing side, while also keeping in mind the actuality of the other side's opinion so you can get them to argue but give every comment enough space for misenterpretation so that they're both arguing the wrong arguments without knowing the other's actual opinion, just their assumption about it, all of which has to be conveyed through one narrator... and I'm making my head hurt just thinking about it.
I'm going to shut up and go to bed now, I think.
Because the argument has a beginning and an end... I just have to link the two of them together somehow.
As a sidenote, if you search yahoo photos for Cinzano bianco, you get at least 4 pictures of Craig Charles. That amuses me.